Error Analysis - Academic Writing

Identify and correct the errors below.

01. The car industry has been boomed for decades.
02. ... not only because the lower price ...
03. ... in the recently years.
04. ... is not health for babies.
05. This market is very attractively.
06. ... most of buyers ...
07. Many companies use this as a strategic to expand their business.
08. ... for example hot food or a toothbrush, paying your bills and collecting the book you ordered online.
09. ... marketing strategies was based on ...
10. ... the main product in beverage industry.
11. The idea of eat well ...
12. ... for it's marketing strategy.
13. ... recommend it strongly to potential students, it is a clever and effective strategy.
14. ... won't feel like they only get to know ...
15. ... balanced stage of even producting and consuming.
16. ... searching information ....
17. Every passenger is given a free porter right from his car ...
18. Therefore, online shopping is became ...
19. ... the number of food chain stores has grown significantly. It always attract ...
20. Firstly, it is to contact with customers directly ...
21. ... how effective the marketing strategy is of convenience stores.
22. ... all the young people receiving ...
23. The car industries become more and more competitive ...
24. Marketing become more important ...














01. The car industry has been boomed for decades.
Either "has boomed" or "has been booming" is correct.

02. ... not only because of the lower price ...
because of + noun., because + verb.

03. ... in the recently years.
OR "Recently" instead of the whole sentence.

04. ... is not healthy for babies.

05. This market is very attractively.

06. ... most of buyers ...

07. Many companies use this as a strategic strategy to expand their business.

08. ... for example, hot food or a toothbrush, paying and you can pay your bills and collecting the book you ordered online.

09. ... marketing strategies strategy was based on ...

10. ... the main product in the beverage industry.

11. The idea of eat eating well ...
OR "to eat well"

12. ... for it's its marketing strategy.
it's means "it is"

13. ... recommend it strongly to potential students, as it is a clever and effective strategy.
OR "... students. It is ..."
OR "... students; it is ..."
OR "... students, which is ..."

14. ... won't will not feel like as if they only get to know ...
no abbreviation in academic writing. use the whole word.

15. ... balanced stage of even producting production and consuming consumption.

16. ... searching for information ....

17. Every passenger is given a free porter right from his that car ...
use "they", "their" instead of "he/she", "his/her" in academic writing

18. Therefore, online shopping is has became ...

19. ... the number of food chain stores has grown significantly. It They always attract ...
as 17.

20. Firstly, it is to contact with customers directly ...
Either "have/make/establish contact with people" or "contact people"

21. ... how effective the marketing strategy is of convenience stores.

22. ... all the young people receiving receive ...
OR "are receiving"

23. The car industries has became more and more competitive ...

24. Marketing has became more important ...