Error Analysis - Academic Writing

Identify and correct the errors below. They could relate to grammar, vocabulary or style.

01. It is important that organisation need to emphasise on secvice quality.
02. Even if customers are satisfied with comapnies, they may still switch the different companies which they like.
03. The company manager need to understand the relationship ...
04. There are several models of service quality, one of the noticeable model is ...
05. Although implement might be possible ...
06. To understand the development of TQM theory can be helpful for both ...
07. Although Deming proposed ..., these perhaps best interpreted as a series of statements ...
08. In the increasingly competitive market, customers have an increasingly number of choices ...
09. Therefore, it is essential for sellers to analysing and evaluating the customer's needs and wants ...
10. Before discussing ... two issues necessary to be firstly clarified.
11. ... providing satisfied services or products ...
12. Secondly, it is needed to comprehend that what the quality is ...
13. ... because of lots of organisations have created a reputation ...
14. A company strive for success, therefore, facing a huge evolution ...
15. This essay will first critical review ...
16. In fact, there were many scholars defined the supply chain management differently ...
17. In addition, X et al define that ...
18. It is suggested that SCM should incorporate with marketing objectives ...













01. It is important that organisation need to put/place emphasise on secvice quality.
OR "Organisations emphasise ... "
OR "Organisations need to ... "
OR "It is important for organisations to ... "

02. Even if customers are satisfied with comapnies, they may still switch to the different companies which they like prefer.

03. The company manager needs to understand the relationship ...
use "A company" is better (and safer)

04. There are several models of service quality, one of the noticeable model is ...
REPHRASE "of which one of the most noticeable is ..."

05. Although implementation might be possible ...
OR "implement Sth."

06. To understand Understanding the development of TQM theory can be is helpful for both ...

07. Although Deming proposed ..., these perhaps are best interpreted as a series of statements ...

08. In the increasingly competitive market, customers have an increasingly number of choices ...

09. Therefore, it is essential for sellers to analysing analyse and evaluating evaluate the customer's needs and wants ...

10. Before discussing ... two issues necessary to be firstly clarified.
REPHRASE "two issues need to be clarified first"
OR "it is necessary to clarify two issues first"

11. ... providing satisfied satisfactory services or products ...

12. Secondly, it is needed necessary to comprehend that what the quality is ...

13. ... because of lots of many organisations have created a reputation ...

14. A company strive striving for success, therefore, facing a huge evolution ...
OR "which is striving"

15. This essay will first critical critically review ...

16. In fact, there were many scholars have defined the supply chain management differently ...

17. In addition, X et al define that ...

18. It is suggested that SCM should be incorporated with marketing objectives ...